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Bionic Sister
17 Jun 2024 13:09 #78220
by frakiller
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Hi everyone,
I've wanted to write for a long time and I'm finally finding the courage to do it.
I'm passionate about the idea of writing a story about a family made up of 4 members: dad, mom, older brother and younger sister, in which the younger sister, after an accident, is made bionic by the government. He therefore finds himself able to run at 200 mph, to be able to lift a car with one hand, to be able to see and hear a block away. How will family dynamics change? What will the older brother think of having a little sister capable of lifting him with one hand?
I'd love to talk about it with all of you and maybe start writing something. Up until now I have only written clips here and there.
I look forward to seeing many of you!
Thank you.
I've wanted to write for a long time and I'm finally finding the courage to do it.
I'm passionate about the idea of writing a story about a family made up of 4 members: dad, mom, older brother and younger sister, in which the younger sister, after an accident, is made bionic by the government. He therefore finds himself able to run at 200 mph, to be able to lift a car with one hand, to be able to see and hear a block away. How will family dynamics change? What will the older brother think of having a little sister capable of lifting him with one hand?
I'd love to talk about it with all of you and maybe start writing something. Up until now I have only written clips here and there.
I look forward to seeing many of you!
Thank you.
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18 Jun 2024 11:13 #78225
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I like your idea.
I think it should be a learning curve for her to understand use and control her abilities.
One thing I think might be intresting is if she will develop integration with electronics (like physical hacking). It might also be intresting to see how her molals work together with the goverment's will of using her for their own. Can she get sick with computer virus?
I think it should be a learning curve for her to understand use and control her abilities.
One thing I think might be intresting is if she will develop integration with electronics (like physical hacking). It might also be intresting to see how her molals work together with the goverment's will of using her for their own. Can she get sick with computer virus?
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18 Jun 2024 12:19 - 18 Jun 2024 12:21 #78226
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Thanks for the reply.
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18 Jun 2024 12:20 - 18 Jun 2024 16:49 #78227
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This is all related to its ability to correlate with its mechanical parts.
The government took it for granted that she would volunteer for secret missions for free but, using her bionic persuasion, she managed to get a reward related to the danger of each mission. I didn't see the virus coming but it might be interesting to see what an out-of-control bionic sister can do.
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There will certainly be a first part of physical tests that allow her to understand how much and what the improved parts of her body are capable of doing. She Would go from walking with difficulty to running on a treadmill at 200 mph after accidentally destroying some that were unable to support her increasing speed. It could also happen that as she begins to develop more speed, she clings to the treadmill handles, deforming them and imprinting the shape of her fingers on them. I'm certainly thinking of many pinched doorknobs or doors coming off their hinges, or headaches from bionic visual and auditory stimuli until she has perfect mastery with her bionic parts. And even after the end of the tests, perhaps when she is distracted or nervous, it may happen that she crushes some object inadvertently.I like your idea.
I think it should be a learning curve for her to understand use and control her abilities.
One thing I think might be intresting is if she will develop integration with electronics (like physical hacking). It might also be intresting to see how her molals work together with the goverment's will of using her for their own. Can she get sick with computer virus?
This is all related to its ability to correlate with its mechanical parts.
The government took it for granted that she would volunteer for secret missions for free but, using her bionic persuasion, she managed to get a reward related to the danger of each mission. I didn't see the virus coming but it might be interesting to see what an out-of-control bionic sister can do.
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18 Jun 2024 16:32 #78231
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18 Jun 2024 17:56 - 18 Jun 2024 22:35 #78232
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I know the show, it accompanied me throughout my childhood. Personally I believe that more interesting situations can be created when only the younger sister, generally weaker than the others, becomes the strongest. It will be fun to see how she herself reacts to outclassing her family. I had also thought that the mother might secretly be bionic....that would be fun.Or the whole family gets bionics?
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bionic_Six
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